Progress Report - Project 1

This week I reached the end of my planned work for Project 1.

I have a few questions:

There are a few places where I feel that the image is still too boring (00:15, 00:26, 01:18, 01:26, 02:55, and 04:15). I am open to suggestions on any additions that could be made, but I don't want to have to complete

I also think I will add a fractal noise displacement effect over the whole animation to make it look a bit more wrinkled and match the texture overlay.

Also, I have considered adding an effect that would drop some frames and make it appear to be stop motion or hand-animated. I am interested on thoughts towards that as well.